Evening Stroll Gone Bad

Something I have been tinkering with for a little over a week. decided to post it today on my Birthday. Another lovely painting job taking some of my critiques from last time, and making some changes. Once again I'd like to hear your opinion on it. if I did anything this time that's better than last time, or if I did anything this time that I should fix, get better at, change, etc. Let me know in the comments below.

As for the girl in the picture, as I know some of you will be asking. It's a model I found on one of those model finder websites. Surprisingly enough from my neck of the woods here in Florida. lol. XD She did look really cute, though. I would love to write something to go along with this.